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Subject: The Great War (REWRIT 1/3
Date: Sat, 18 Feb 95 16:09:42 EDT
The Great War (rewritten and revised)
Written by John C. Chapman Jr.
Characters:
[ USS Enterprise ]
Captain Jean-luc Picard
Commander William T. Riker
Lt. Commander Worf
Lt. Commander Data
Counselor Deanna Troi
Lt. Commander Gordi LaForge
Doctor Beverly Crusher
[ USS Voyager ]
Captain Kathryn Janeway
Lt. Tom Paris
Lt. Harry Kim
Neelix
Kes
Lt. Commander Tuvok
Chief Engineer Torres
Commander Chakotay
[ Deep Space Nine ]
Commander Benjamin Sisko
Lt. Judzia Dax
Major Kira Naryss
Constable Odo
Chief of Operations Miles O'Brien
Doctor Julian Bashir
Quark
[ Babylon 5 ]
Captain John Sheridan
Commander Susan Ivanova
Chief of Security Michael Garabaldi
Ambassador Londo Mollari of the Centari Republic
Ambassador G'Kar of The Narn Regime
Ambassador Delenn of the Minbari
Ambassador Kosh of the Vorlon Empire
Commander Jeffery Sinclaire
[ Star Ships of the Star Trek Universe ]
* Name of Captain * * Name of Starship * * Starship Class *
[ FEDERATION ]
Captain Connor Macleod USS Highlander Nebula
Captain James L. Webb USS Bandit Galaxy
Captain Curtis A. Campbell USS Kilrathi Nebula
Captain Gregory Chaffins USS Guru Nova
Admiral Jonathan Chapman USS Nova Nova
Captain Jean-Luc Picard USS Enterprise Nova
Commander Benjamin Sisko USS Defiant Intrepid
Captain Kathryn Janeway USS Voyager Intrepid
[ ROMULAN ]
Commander Tomalok Crescent Moon Romulan Warbird
Commander Sela Rising Star Romulan Warbird
[ BORG ]
Hugh none Borg Starship
[ Klingon ]
Captain Kern PAH Klingon Bird of Prey
Captain Alexander Rueshico Mog Klingon Warbird
[ FERINGI ]
Damon Goth Unpronounceable Ferengi Warcraft
Damon Both Unpronounceable Ferengi Warcraft
[ Ships of the Babylon Five Universe ]
[ Earth Alliance ]
General Franklin Fighting Hawk Earth Defense Crusier
[ Narn Regime ]
Ambassador G'Kar none Narn Star Crusier
[ Centari Republic ]
Ambassador Londo Mollari none Centari Star Crusier
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Subject: The Great War (REWRIT 2/3
Date: Sat, 18 Feb 95 16:09:38 EDT
>>> Continued from previous message
Ivanova: " Ivanova to Sheridan, Captain there is an unauthorized ship
coming through the jumpgate. Sir its designs meets none of
the known type of Starships."
Sheridan: " Well, whoever they are, hail them and tell them to hold
position 2500 meters away from the station. We can't allow
any ships to come through the gate unauthorized. Not since
the Centari and Narns went to war against each other."
Ivanova: " Aye, sir. This is Babylon 5 Space Station to unknown vessel
Please identify yourself, and hold postion of 2500 meters
away from the station."
Janeway: " This is Captain Kathryn Janeway of the United Federation of
Planets and this is the USS Voyager. May I ask who you people
are and what you are doing in Federation Space?"
Sheridan: " I am Captain John Sheridan of the Earth Alliance and this is
Babylon 5 space station. What do you mean federation space?
What Federation of Planets?"
Janeway: " Captain Sheridan, We have a problem here. May I and a couple of
my crew come aboard."
Sheridan: " Yes, here are the coordinates to plot a flight course...."
Before Sheridan could finish his sentence, Captain Janeway, Tuvok, and Torres
beamed aboard. This caught Sheridan by surpise.
Sheridan: " How did you do that?"
Janeway: " do what? oh, you mean beam aboard..well its a long story. What I
here to talk about is who are you? Where we are? and how do we
get back home?"
[ End Chapter One ]
[ Chapter Two - Enterprise times Q ]
Captain's log:
Stardate 48135.56
" We have been ordered to Deep Space Nine to assist in helping repair the
station after the last attack from the dominion. I hope that Commander
Sisko has forgiven me for the death of his wife. I still regret the loss
of all the life because of my abduction by the borg."
Captain Jean-luc Picard entered the turbolift and headed for the bridge. He
has happy to be back in command of a star ship after seven months of shore
leave. He had gone back to his family estate to moarn the loss of his family.
He almost didn't have the strength to go on, after losing his only brother and
nephew.
Picard: " Whats is ETA to DS9, ensign?"
Ensign: " 0900 hours sir. There is a sub space message coming in from DS9,
its commander Sisko."
Picard: " Patch into my ready room"
As the view screen came on, the face of the very man he was thinking about
earlier came on.
Picard: " Commander Sisko what can I do for you?"
Sisko: " Captain, I know I have acted hostile towards in the past. I am truly
sorry for my actions, but it took me a long time to get over my wife
and it wasn't easy for me either. But that isn't the reason I have
contacted you. The Reason is that we haven't heard from the Voyager
for almost three months now, and well Star Fleet is nervous that the
maquis have taken control of the vessel and killed the crew. I was
a close friend to Captain Janeway, I was hoping that you may have
heard something from starfleet command about the voyager."
Picard: " I am sorry Commander, but we haven't heard nothing about the voyager
since her disapearance. "
Sisko: " What is your ETA, Captain?"
Picard: " We should arrive at 0900 hours "
Sisko: " Captain, may I speak frankly with you?"
Picard: " By all means "
Sisko: " Well every since the last attack from the Dominion. We have been
having spacial anonamlys poping up all over the place. Star Fleet
has been keeping it quiet. But I don't think that last attack was
from the Dominion but from a new enemy. I'll brief you once you
and your crew arrives. Sisko Out."
As the Enterprise made its way to Deep Space Nine, a old nemisis of Captain
Picards was watching and laughing. Q had made good to his promise, he had
been watching the Enterprise all this time, and was having fun throwing
obstacles into her captains way.
Picard: " Enterprise to DS9, permission to come aboard."
Kira: " Permission granted "
A few minutes later Captain Picard and Commander Riker beamed aboard DS9.
They were greeted by Major Kira Nryass and Commander Benjamin Sisko.
Sisko: " Its good to see you again Captain Picard."
Picard: " Its good to be back."
Riker: " Hello Major Kira "
Kira: " Hello Will, how are you doing?"
Riker: " I am sorry about what my double did to you. I...."
Kira: " Don't Worry about it, He wasn't too bad. He's alot like you in many
ways. But also alot different."
Sisko: " Well Captain, if you will follow me, I'll lead you to your quarters"
Picard: " Please call me Jean-Luc "
Sisko: " Only if you stop calling me commander and start calling me Benjamin "
Picard: " Agreed "
A few minutes later at Quarks, Commander Riker and Major Kira entered. And
as usaual Quark was up to his old tricks.
Quark: " Commander Riker, I hope that you aren't here to clean me out again
on the Donjot tables are you?"
Riker: " No, not unless you give me a reason to.."
Quark: " I don't know what you are talking about"
Quark walked off seeming to be offended by Commander Rikers statement. Odo
suddenly appeared out of no where to be seated by Commander Riker.
Riker: " Constable, what can I do for you?"
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Subject: The Great War (REWRIT 3/3
Date: Sat, 18 Feb 95 16:09:40 EDT
>>> Continued from previous message
Odo: " I was just wondering if it was the REAL Commander Riker this time, and
not some double."
Riker: " I can assure you that I am the Real Commander William Thomas Riker."
Kira: " So Odo, what is Quark up to today?"
Odo: " Oh, nothing much, unless you count the bribe he tried to give Commander
Sisko."
Kira: " Bribe??"
Odo: " Yes, he actually tried to buy the old ore refining center on the
station."
Riker: " You got to be joking."
Odo: " I never joke "
Riker: " Well I guess we all better head to ops, Commander Sisko and
Captain Picard have a announcement to make, about the last dominion attack. "
[End Chapter Two]
Coming soon...
[ Chapter Three - A new ally and a new enemy ]
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